by Knight_of_Blackrose Feb 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Far from your youth |
since i know whats going on it makes emotions much more clear but it is a bit confusing, almost as if something lies deeper but as a reader we can't find it. Anyhow, great poem Aaron and whoever gave you a 2 seriously don't know what they are talking about... |
confusing, but the deeper side to it makes it such a moving poem, great work, keep writing. |