Ur poem is pretty good. U could maybe go a little further in ur descriptions and things. it was pretty good.
-Incognito

wow, i thought the descriptions were right on key, very good*5
Love Heather.

as for the comment on "i never got to tell you"...umm its actually my boyfriend it happened to 4 years go but hes okay now...its been 4 years ago, but thanks for the concern, God bless u
Love HMC

Wonderful imagery, well done! Very effective xxx

oh wow!!! i absolutely love this, written so so so beautifully! i know just what you mean. take care and eep smiling hun..
love cim xoxo

oh wow!!! i absolutely love this, written so so so beautifully! i know just what you mean. take care and eep smiling hun..
love cim xoxo

wow..you have a perfect way of describing things..it makes you feel like your right there. Great.

You described things perfectly and it felel like im watching it all...Good Luck with the writing....Bye
thanxz for the comment on my poem :)