Powerful work and message. Very well described. The rhyming didn't seem to interfere with the actual message of the poem either. Cleverly written. |
wonderful poem keep it up. 5/5 |
by Kia
wow awesome poem... and the truth has been spoken i know that i feel like that alot of the time... im not skinny enough im not pretty enought... those feelings suck... awesome job |
by jennifer
Amazing poem and so very true. 5/5 as always. Take care |