Its really really good.... I liked it... hope you keep up the writing...I would love to read more some other time!

wow this is really good. I can relate to it so much. Well done!

Wow hun, awesome...sad, tho powerful...wish I could help you :( i love you, I'm alwyas here for you xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

love it! the endings great.. the whole poem is.. but the last stanze really stuck out.
-K

OMG that is so good!!!!!!! Keep writing i luv reading it...
Kisses, M