Great job hun, I loved this one...you're awesome at ones like this <33...wish I could be with you at tmes like these, I love you hun, you're so amazing, all of you...I wish I could be your sunshine every second, up close and personal, you know? I love you hun...try to stay positive always, till I'm with you, and even then, I love you <33 xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

It's REALLY good( not to mention REALLY true)!

Captured war well, great describing, had a good rhythm to it and the rhyming seemed natural, great job overall xxx

dude....THATS AWESOME !!! lol, ok I'll shut up with that....LoVe !
E.

Great poem which captured the essence of war nicely.