Awww hunnie, I wish I could be there, I'd do anything so you wouldn't feel alone, you are my everything and I love you sooooo sooooo much!!! I swear I need you so bad. I love you Logan....This was very, very, very well written, I loved it...good rhymes and diction and all that, and the flow was good and you know, all that, it was excellent. I love you. <33 xxxxxxxxx |
by Kit
I'm sorry, hun! Good write, tho... |
by Elise
wow, logan ! That's an amazing poem !!! (aren't I geting repetitive ?) whatever, great job !!! Love, |
Another amazing poem by you. Very nicely rhymed. |
by ?
Aw I know who you feel with the aloneness, and you just expressed it so well, take care xxx |
by Andrea
excellent poem! it is very well written. i really like the second to last stanza too. great words! |
by Taylor
great poem! i love it! really amazing! i can relate so easily! keep it up! |