Comments : Alone

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awww hunnie, I wish I could be there, I'd do anything so you wouldn't feel alone, you are my everything and I love you sooooo sooooo much!!! I swear I need you so bad. I love you Logan....This was very, very, very well written, I loved it...good rhymes and diction and all that, and the flow was good and you know, all that, it was excellent. I love you. <33 xxxxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kit

    I'm sorry, hun! Good write, tho...

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    wow, logan ! That's an amazing poem !!! (aren't I geting repetitive ?) whatever, great job !!! Love,
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Another amazing poem by you. Very nicely rhymed.

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Aw I know who you feel with the aloneness, and you just expressed it so well, take care xxx

    p.s. Could you please check out my poem 'Thank you xxx' Its to all the people on this site and anyone whos commented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem! it is very well written. i really like the second to last stanza too. great words!

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really amazing! i can relate so easily! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor