That is one good poem, love it! xxx

Nice work. I liked how you wrote this one. But again i felt something missing, as you say in the first stanza "A legend in the making
But never quite got there"
This poem is potentially very good, but the feelings and emotions behind it didn't quite get there.
Also in the second stanza the first two lines are very long. I was thinking to help the structure of the rest of the poem, you could turn them two into four. Then either add to the third and fourth line to create another 4 lined stanza, or just leave it as a two lined stanza.
Keep writing, Keep improving.