Long road

by clevername   Feb 3, 2005


I ran down this long dirt path
While the wind brushed past my face
My hair flew behind me and my dark eyes filled with tears
I listened to my drowning heart speed up
And my rough bare feet slow down
Suddenly I stopped as I saw this single tree
In the middle of a dark lonely field
Bruised hands on my knees bent over
I saw it sway
Back and forth it went as my mind grew dizzy with pain
Staring at the tree and watching the black roses brush by I held my cross dangled form my skinny neck
While I felt so alone like the tree in the middle of nothing
I was alone
Away from everything
Burning in the middle of a desert completely secluded I felt

This field was dark and empty with no grass
no anything
Just me all alone
on this path that I couldnt understand a reason for
I began to stare down the road
As I calmed down and wondered how far it would go
And when it was finally over what would be at the end of it
"nothing" I said allowed
"nothing as is at that end of this lonely road because there was nothing at the beginning to it"
Slowly I began to walk through the mist as my feet throbbed
I didn’t care though
I just had to get away from that horrible place
As my feet slowly stepped across the gravel I searched through my mind and remember those piercing eyes
Seeing straight through me
He could see all my fears
All my pain
And all my tears

This is acutally a short story i wrote but i put it in a poem form or what ever so yah!!! i want ot see what peopel have to say about it!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    I would like to read tho whole story to it.

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    thanx so much kt!!

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    wow, you decribed this so well! a really interesting story!! keep writing!
    luv kt