I love you hunny now and forever and yes the day will come and I will be your wife. I do. <3 Bobbie

I know its' an incredible poem with an amazing story behind it or some kind of feeling being described.... but i honestly can't grasp it. Not because you havn't been descriptive or clear enough, but because your high level vocabulary is well above my own. so for that i congratulate you.

"Pain or pleasure, life or death", that is a very very powerful line, that really hit it out. ok, i'm writng this as i read so i think it's understandable if i read slowly....

right. It's mostly got remarkable flow, however "But know that Ill always be here" there's soemhting wrong with that line. i think it's a syllable out of place or something. for some reason it just doesn't fit.

But hey, it was absolutely, undeniably worth my time. It was a very well written. as you may have noticed, i commented on 2 of your poems, this is due to teh fact that this poem was so good, i thought i might enjoy reading another.
thanks again for comemnting on "truth divine" even though i didn't understand the letter thing you were talking about.

-Suzie

Another beautiful piece. I loved it from start to end. You certainly have an amazing vocabulary range. I hope I dont need a dictionary for the next poem I read:P.. but seriously that was awesome. There was so much pain and agony in this poem but its so beautiful. I loved it! Great job!

--emotionless.19*

Wonderfull poem!!! but you wont be alone, though I know how you feel.. but hopefully you will make the mentioned party your wife :) keep it up!!!