Comments : Only you

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    very deep....

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Can I ask one little question, are all 66(haha 66 wow thats like 666) of your poems bout this girl Brandy?
    I personly didn't like this one but it is old and you have improved as a writer, but this has good ideas and I would love to see it redone to flow better.
    Like Ari said its deep, its also powerful, but needs help:D

    *im evil, it feels good saying sorry*

    Your a great poet, learning more everyday keep it up xx

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    *im evil, it feels good saying sorry*
    edited 2
    *I'm evil,it feels good saying this, im sorry*