Can I ask one little question, are all 66(haha 66 wow thats like 666) of your poems bout this girl Brandy?
I personly didn't like this one but it is old and you have improved as a writer, but this has good ideas and I would love to see it redone to flow better.
Like Ari said its deep, its also powerful, but needs help:D
*im evil, it feels good saying sorry*
Your a great poet, learning more everyday keep it up xx