this poem made my eyes moist. i was feeling a little bit down and wanted to read some poem that match up to what im feeling... then soon after i read your comment in the botton, "when we aren't able to kill ourselves, there is a reason, perhaps a lost loved one saving us, because they can see all the happiness that awaits us. Even if we can't"

thank you!

It's touching, kind of reminds me of myself in a way. Nice choice of words, it's easy to make a mental picture with your work. Keep it up.

great poem...after reading wat u wrote in the end, i read the poem once more, and i almost cried...cuz right be4 i read this poem i felt rly horrible.....stupid sh*t going on with parentz and all...blah blah blah...and it makes me wonder, must be sum1 who sees the happiness...bcz its crystal clear tht there isn't any...w/e great poem anyway....i loved it, gave you a 5..you deserve it =)