Rose petals

by Dead As Yesterday   Feb 3, 2005


Dreaming about things that wont come true
Secretly crying, longing to hold you
Your smile is an oasis, a mirage for my soul
My feelings so deep they rage uncontrolled

Your eyes like emeralds shine through the night
Captivated by your beauty, my hearts delight
For all my life’s wishes you are the key
Lips like rose petals, tiny thorns torturing me

Life is uncertain when it comes to time
I’m working on myself to help change your mind
Some sunny day just maybe we’ll see
Rose petals will be rubies longing for me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lola Granny

    Very well written ^ 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Aww that poem's so sad...I hope they do come true for you..Nice write. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    aww its so beautiful
    you are really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Rose

    This is a wonderful peice - not only because I'm biased because of the title ..heh.. The words..the heart in it...beautiful. You seem to express yourself so effortlessly, it's refreshing, a pleasure to read. Thank you for your kind words on my poems, I appreicate your comments, hope to read and hear more from you.
    rose oxo

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Wow!...theres just no other word to describe it besides wow! lol This was a really great poem, I really liked reading it!! Excellent work! Keep it up I can see you have tons of talent!!:o)
    5outta5 from me!
    Shannon

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