Damaged Window

by Krete   Feb 3, 2005


How much is that life,
the one I'm looking to see,
that one behind the window,
the one crying to me.

It isnt a mirrow,
as I have glanced,
its a darkness lyric,
one set in advance.

Its stares into the void,
the heartache hold,
something darkly toyed,
a sadness ode.

Like adult misdirection,
its a broken mantle,
a promised perception,
liken like a candle.

Melting to its Out.
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*OKAY...

*Tell me if I should delete it.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    No dont delete it! it's awsome!great job! 5/5 definatly

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    no please dont delete it. i really loved it. it was eerily beautiful, from beginning to end. easily one of my favourite poems. great job.
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    this poem has a very deep hidden meaning behind it...a one i could relate to so much....i think u should not delete this poem,no matter wht others have to say..take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow.. man this was really good - you shouldn't delete it at all. I'm sure there is a very neat story behind this poem.. poems like these are so great, and I definitely think it's one of your best. Keep it up! :)

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