Wow.. man this was really good - you shouldn't delete it at all. I'm sure there is a very neat story behind this poem.. poems like these are so great, and I definitely think it's one of your best. Keep it up! :)

this poem has a very deep hidden meaning behind it...a one i could relate to so much....i think u should not delete this poem,no matter wht others have to say..take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

no please dont delete it. i really loved it. it was eerily beautiful, from beginning to end. easily one of my favourite poems. great job.
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No dont delete it! it's awsome!great job! 5/5 definatly