wow this is a brilliant poem filled with passion and love its excellent i loved it its a great poem and very creative you are soooooooo talented and thank you for the comments they mean alot! this is an abolute fantastic poem i mean it! it was so sweet and i recently fell inlove lol so i love these poems lol! hehe great work >>5/5<<
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i like how you started it with...dont be afraid to fall for someone becasue they may fall for you! it is tru, it hurts 2 b rejecyed, but taking chances is better bkuz the reward is greater! love the work.!!!