The last bit seemed like a forced rhyme. Anyway, it was good. (I think the other one was better =P so yeah) Anyway, nice write.

~LYMTAB Lipton

You didn't happen to be staring at a clock in Mr. Cress's room when you wrote this did you? LOL...I agree with Lipton, but good job anyway :)

God Bless

What an interesting topic. lol.