it wasnt ur best u should have fixed the ending a little bit but other than tht it was good

this is an intresting poem, i like it. hope it's not true, i know it can be a real pain if a mum is like that and dosen't trust you
good work

Aww this is just like my mom....dont be who anyone wants you to be,be yourself!If your mom doesnt like you for who you are,then she will have to deal with it!You are you and no one can change it!