by Robert Feb 4, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Pure and raw to the core, |
by Jaymes Haze
Were you said you and me, although gramatically improper, you should've reveresed otherwise, I enjoyed your insight on the fire that burns inside us all. |
by nikki
Your rhyming is just amazing. the words you use are so different to any normal poem, the rhyming you use is a bit harder than normal words and i found that it was so much better to read with different words. 5/5 and it was an awesome job. |
by Britney
Veri unique.. i liked it though it has a good message.. keep up the good work i only got confused on one line and it was this one... |
by dragonfly
I love this poem, you write strongly and use meaningful words. |
by Andrea
awesome flow. i thought it was very well written |