Our Drive

by Robert   Feb 4, 2005


Pure and raw to the core,
when the body stops the soul cries for more.
Taking all the pain inside I prizefighter hoping for an end,
it sees this power of emotion as its only friend.
Bleeding blood soaked and no where to go,
the fallen sucks it up and continues his show.
Beaten and hell-bent on salvation or damnation,
he stalks the earth for his painful in cremation.
Then there is the soldier, who watches his friends die at his feet,
only to get another liar on the Nation’s highest seat.
They all have one thing in common they all have one thing that is true,
and it is an emotion that resides in you and me.
It’s the feeling to go on when there is no joy in sight,
it is the will that thrives and gives us the power to fight.
When we feel alone and weary of the day,
it is the key to make us hunter not prey.
Down in the soul where dark things dwell,
it is the constant of all life that makes us excel.
To enjoy life and feel the glory to be alive,
for my friend it is our gift within that commands our drive.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Were you said you and me, although gramatically improper, you should've reveresed otherwise, I enjoyed your insight on the fire that burns inside us all.

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Your rhyming is just amazing. the words you use are so different to any normal poem, the rhyming you use is a bit harder than normal words and i found that it was so much better to read with different words. 5/5 and it was an awesome job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Veri unique.. i liked it though it has a good message.. keep up the good work i only got confused on one line and it was this one...
    They all have one thing in common they all have one thing that is true,
    and it is an emotion that resides in you and me.

    jus didnt seem to match the rest of the rhyme scheme oyu had but great job keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I love this poem, you write strongly and use meaningful words.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    awesome flow. i thought it was very well written