Cool hon I liked this one a lot.

I love your vocabulary. :) And none of your rhymes seem forced when you use such gigantic words. ;)

Great message in this poem. I really enjoy your writing style.

I think this poem has many hidden messages. Therefore it will be percieved differently by every reader.

Keep Writing
Nici

awesome flow. i thought it was very well written

I love this poem, you write strongly and use meaningful words.

Veri unique.. i liked it though it has a good message.. keep up the good work i only got confused on one line and it was this one...
They all have one thing in common they all have one thing that is true,
and it is an emotion that resides in you and me.

jus didnt seem to match the rest of the rhyme scheme oyu had but great job keep it up!

Your rhyming is just amazing. the words you use are so different to any normal poem, the rhyming you use is a bit harder than normal words and i found that it was so much better to read with different words. 5/5 and it was an awesome job.

Were you said you and me, although gramatically improper, you should've reveresed otherwise, I enjoyed your insight on the fire that burns inside us all.