Wow exellent a second chance great choice on the ending of this poem. I liked it alot! Check out mine if u would Thanx!

This is a good emotional poem and has been written really well. 5/5. Love Emma xxx

I really liked the end..."a rope?".....great job! This poem was good, except personally i don't like the idea of suicide in poems, but still i can't deny this is a very good poem. Keep on writing, you're talented!
SatuzKa