One Black Rose

by .:Breezy:.   Feb 4, 2005


Deep with in my soul
Lies one little rose
It stand apart from all the others
Its the one with no red color

Black is found in and out
Small and weak
Without a doubt
But this small rose can live on strong
It can find some where it really belongs

It takes hold of my pain
It soaks in all my crying rain
All my pain and all my fear
Makes it grow bigger every year

This black rose is just like me
Different in and out
Small and weak
With out a doubt

But she finds love from someone new
Some who shows her that love is true
He doesn't say things, doest judge
One of those people who are all of the above

He shows her things she never knew
Makes her smile when shes feeling blue
He helps her out through her painful life
Makes her put away that little knife

He helps her find herself
He understands her like no one else
And soon that rose turns from black to grey
And soon turns to red with once silent pray

But deep within is one dark spot
That last little place that with stay distrot
To remind her of what her life one was
To remind her what a loving touch does

And if that touch goes away
There is that part where she can go back to and stay

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bitten by frost

    Wow..i liked this poem a lot! i liked the structure, the rhyme scheme, the imigery and the colour. But most of all, i loved the sentiment, keep writting...

  • 18 years ago

    by WtrmlnLvr

    Hey....wow....thats really touching! It was really good and i hope that you never have to go back to that little spot and stay because i know its a lonely feeling!! keep up the great work, i love it!!
    ~michelle~

  • 19 years ago

    by ~ChEeKs~

    i like your poem it was really good