i like your poem it was really good

Hey....wow....thats really touching! It was really good and i hope that you never have to go back to that little spot and stay because i know its a lonely feeling!! keep up the great work, i love it!!
~michelle~

Wow..i liked this poem a lot! i liked the structure, the rhyme scheme, the imigery and the colour. But most of all, i loved the sentiment, keep writting...