by Robert Feb 4, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
You run in cycles commanding the waves and the tide, |
by x Mo x
Wow. That was great. |
by Fsams
This piece is also nice but there is room for improvement like reducing the syllabic coun to improve the flow. I liked your descriptions and the topic of the poem really reflects in this poem. I gave you 5/5 for your beautiful wordings and lexical power. |
by Ashley Ann
Nicely said 5/5 |
by Ashley Ann
Very good poem.. you write long poems. good imagery.5/5 |
by kiesha
I really like this poem. It has some great imagery, and you capture the moon very well. I'm sure you've already heard this, but you're a great writer. Take care and God bless. |