Hey, this is a beautiful poem, sad, but still great, keep up the good work xxx

This is so good =). Very well written, really good rhymes. Keep up the good work
Paula<3 <--Keep on writing

P.s if you got time think ya could comment on some of mine

wow this is amazing...i'm deff going to have to read some more of your poems. Sooo good. CHeck out some of mine if you want. I'd appreciate your ideas/comments. thanks
LOve Always,
Angel

wow this is amazing...i'm deff going to have to read some more of your poems. Sooo good. CHeck out some of mine if you want. I'd appreciate your ideas/comments. thanks
LOve Always,
Angel

gr8 poem, but as u said suicide is a bad idea...
stay strong *hugs*

p.s.:check out mine when you have time, thx

I feel bad that my comments dont have really much in them anymore but all your poetry is so fenominal theres not muhc i can say except to praise it. Your my favorite poet on the site and if you ever wanted to check out some of my poems and give me some tips i would be honoured. thank you