Comments : One word and your gone

  • 19 years ago

    by Lu

    They say love hurts and they say that for a good reason . It chews you up and spits you out but when it is the one true love ( your soul mate ) it enfolds you and holds you tight .
    Your poem is full of pain and hurt , and as the saying goes "if you love someone , set them free and if they come back to you , it was meant to be ."
    I hope all turns out well for you ,your poem was so full of emotion . A job well done .