by Ashleigh Skye Feb 4, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
You see her standing in the shadows, |
Wow...I can actually picture the scene...and it's creepy...yeah...you have so much imagination...and it's good. |
by Hayley Marie
omg... this is awesome!!!! brilliant write!! keep up the good work!! |
by TrUtH hUrTs
Just like the crack of a bat. |
hm i think a good name would be 'that girl' or 'that little girl' or 'her' or 'she' whatever the names your choice but as for the poem nice work! its really poetic and creative i really liked it you seem really talented! brilliant poem! 5/5 |
by creasy
this was...great!! nice job!! keep it up!! :) |