It was a terrible thing. A man who was in a concentration camp came into my school and talked about it, he said that the most important thing is that we do not let this happen again, and we must never forget what happened, we are the young people of this country and we must stop anything like this ever happening again. xxx

That poem was so touching....another great poem!

A good idea,
try to work on your vocabulary and the way you string things together

overall very good