This heart

by clevername   Feb 4, 2005


Come see this work of art
Ive worked on it for long
all these details and specific lines made not to be wrong

come see this bloody painting
its getting easier every day
the first piece i have to admit i did delay

come see my bright red canvas
in the middle of this dark hall
slaving over it became such a ball

now why do you look so scared
do you not call this art
here feel it and its beauty why do insist to depart?

why are you so scared of these deep crimson lines please don't back away
its not that time of day

but your eyes grow wide
as you stare at my painting
you lie that your husband is outside waiting

what do you mean i wonder as i stare at this work
these are precious scars along my wrist do they lurk

leave you do as the room grows dark
so i may continue this painting coming straight from the heart

~please comment and vote thanx~

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  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    WOW !! this is really amazing. very deep and i think many can relate to some of the emotions in it.keep writing, i like your style. thanks very much for your comments too!:)xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    Its really good! I love your work! I'm gona ass u to my favorites!

    much love
    savannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    wow. that was good.

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    thanx so muc hfor the comment i hope poeple stop judging you i hate judgmental people its like get to no me first