nice one 5/5 |
wow... this is more than amazing. i absolutely loooooove it!!! beautiful poem. keep up the amazing work! |
by ChildofGod87
Wow... I loved it:) Sad but very well written! Keep it up Heather:X God Bless! *5/5*... |
by tragic
hey heather yet again another work of art from you u never sieze to amaze me lol well im just touchin up and about that rap i had that u had commented on that it doesnt portray me well it does portray the old me thats some what how my life use to be like but im not like that anymore this is how i am and this is what u know me as thats why u were kinda surprised eh well yeah i wanted to try something different that reflects my past life which wasnt even long ago its been about 5 months since i got outta that hell hole of war anyway hit me back oh yeah how can i email you now? |
Omg Heather! This poem is truly amazing! Your poems are just do good, and I can like relate to all of them! Its so neat! keep on writting |
by happy days
wow.. that was really good heather, u hav so much talent, keep up the good work xxxx |
great poem. i havent read ur other poems yet but by this one i bet it will be an amazing poem. |
by Lithium
I LOVE IT!!! |
by Dorotea©
Yes, it really sums up things and it was a good poem....keep it up!!! |
by christina
another great poem it was sad keep it up hunz peace |