I really liked the contradicting lines you spun from, "Light, why must you bother me?
I only want to endure the darkness"
you really portrayed the emotions and images formed from the narrator with your dark symbols and desires revealed through the images you portrayed written in the piece
Well done

Hey, I really like this one, I often feel like this, and you are very good at expressing your emotions, it makes it very easy to relate to, I also loved how you repeated some lines, it gave it a bit of a different twist, keep up the great work and keep writing xxx