by TrUtH hUrTs Feb 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
We ran to catch the morning dew |
good job.. gave you another 5,... im not quite sure if this is a truly happy one or if its a poem looking back on lost love that once was... because if it is the first i was going to put it in my book of poems... (giving you credit for it of course!) if you could, let me know a lil more about it... i wasnt the one who wrote it so i dont know what feelings you put into it... so post me soemthing under requests for ratings and comments... and refresh my memory of which one this is.. i have a horrible memmory... so yeah keep up the awesome talent! |
by Dorotea©
omg, beautiful. I love the verse something "cinnamon kiss" or however it went, that's so cute. I truly loved this poem. Take care, |
by Georgi
awwwww i love this poem u have talent keep wirting ill be reading xxx |
by TrUtH hUrTs
lol why can;t u sit back , relax and try to flow with the poem instead of counting lines per stanza etc?? i think poems should be freed from such constraints and allowed any lenght.words per line etc |
by ** JeNa **
good job, your really talented, keep up the great work. |