that was cute...keep it up!! :) thanks for the comments!!

wow very poetic its a beautiful poem and very creative excellent work! 5/5
bec xXx

I loved this poem It was awesome!!!Great job Keep up the excellent work MuchLoveJJ

thats was a really cute poem, i loved it, ur a really awsome writer, hope to read more of ur work soon

Wow. That was brilliant! No critisim that I can offer. It flowed so amazingly. I only hope that some day I will be able to write like this. Amazing!

thats SO GOOD! Really well written, great language!!!! Keep writing, 5/5
luv kt

wow, thar was amazingly, ur such a good poet, keep it up xxxx

i don't understand how its scattered bala, you have to look a little deeper to catch the true meaning...very beautiful!!

love Heather.

it's beautiful.... you have to read it a time or two to understand it fully... but none the less beautiful!

OOooo so cute....i have to talk about this..so neways c ya later

It was a little confusing the first time I read it, but the second time made it more clear. It was a very 'deep' and meaningful poem. Nicely done.

no honey i'm not in love just wastin my time...

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wow..this was simply amazing!!!!WOW! You are such a great writer!!!!!! Keep it up! I cant wait to read more!
Love Always,
Angel

I absolutly love it! Especially this line:

cinnamon kiss of liquid sun

I don'w what I like so much about it, I just do! lol Great job and Keep it up!

i loved it! beautiful! a five!

luv it. gave it a 5.

~ ananya, nice write, beautiful
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

WoW that was realy good you have such a great talent

This is a really good poem and has been written really well. 5/5. Love Emma xxx