by Robert Feb 5, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
other
I see the sun, rise and fall proclaiming the day, |
by Michelle18
You had a good ending.. but that last line was kinda long...you had good word choices but i thought the flow was a little off... but overall it was pretty good. 4/5 |
by mikaella
Wow i was touched by your creativity in your writing... it was beautiful!! your should comment my poems. |
Good, job not your best but certainly still better than a lot on this site xxx alex xxx |
A very creative way of expressing the point. |
by Fsams
Hope the rating goes up cos I gave you 5/5. I like this kinda poems v much :). Love the way you have expressed and it could have been better if it was well-structured. keep in touch and keep it up :) |