The Window And Me

by Robert   Feb 5, 2005


I see the sun, rise and fall proclaiming the day,
but still I have to lie here and stay.
My family course through the room saying everything is alright,
but all I want to do is get away from these stale lights.
How could something be so bright but hold no life,
just get these tubes out of my arm and thing will do even a knife.
The Doctors tell me I will be home soon to start my life once more,
but some how I doubt it will be like before.
Outside it always seems around to that point with me,
seeing all these people out there being free but not me.
I got upset one day and through a cup at the window pane,
just to have one chance to relieve this heart ache and pain.
My mother cursed me and my dad told me it was the wrong thing to do,
so tell me would you do the same if I were you?
I even tried to draw the curtain over and over just to get out the light,
but its some thing I long for my soul only wishes to see the sight.
Finally after months I was ready to come out in to the world I missed,
and as I looked down from my window a bird hit the pain I guess it was pissed?

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    You had a good ending.. but that last line was kinda long...you had good word choices but i thought the flow was a little off... but overall it was pretty good. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    Wow i was touched by your creativity in your writing... it was beautiful!! your should comment my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Good, job not your best but certainly still better than a lot on this site xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    A very creative way of expressing the point.
    The flow wasn't so good, but poems don't need it.
    The depth was amazing, as was the emotion.
    A lovely job with this one. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Hope the rating goes up cos I gave you 5/5. I like this kinda poems v much :). Love the way you have expressed and it could have been better if it was well-structured. keep in touch and keep it up :)

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    Fsams