this is really sad....great poem, comes straight from your heart.! i'll give you a 4.... and that's good... b/c... votes shouldn't just be given away, and to be a 5 it must blow me away! good job! <3 Janie

very good poem, emotional and well written

wonderful emotions~!!` keep it up

Your poems are so sad and filled with so much emotion I like the way u write about ur true feelings. Chck out some of mine if u would Thanx!