Comments : Foolish mistake

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    OMG its beautiful. so sad, yet so amazing. great write!
    Fighter
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by twisted faith

    hiya babes
    still can't believe this poem, its a shame that shit like that happens all the time thou
    keep up the gd work

  • 19 years ago

    by Angeline

    Also a very sad poem! It's a nice story incide of the poem, emphasized by the right words, well done...

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    I just loved this poem. it's amazing

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Lynn

    very good... also sad... keep writing.
    love,
    ~Katie~

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    OMg..Luved it well done keep it Up XOxxox Stephy :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    You've got a nice story behind it but I think you could have made it rhym a little better. But over all it was pretty good. Nice work. >3jess