by Nici Feb 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
The shimmering of light that echoes on the bay |
Excellent poem 5 thank you so much for the really nice comments! Your so nice! I hope to hear from you more~ |
i really enjoyed this poem, i like your contrast between all your poems, there so differetn but i love them all |
by Sean
Good poem, though the flow is a bit choppy, it's got some beautiful imagery :) |
by bucky
well wriiten ... thank god you finally got rid of the writters block ... cause i enjoy reading your work ... keep writing |