well wriiten ... thank god you finally got rid of the writters block ... cause i enjoy reading your work ... keep writing

Good poem, though the flow is a bit choppy, it's got some beautiful imagery :)

i really enjoyed this poem, i like your contrast between all your poems, there so differetn but i love them all

XsaraX

Excellent poem 5 thank you so much for the really nice comments! Your so nice! I hope to hear from you more~