this is a really really good, and strong poem. you have very talented writing skills, as i can feel the emotions that are being conveyed. i know how it feels to feel like this, that noone cares, that it doesnt matter what anyone says to change your mind about how you are feeling.
take care, and keep the poems coming.
polly
xxx

I can really relate to this one, its seriously good, I have often felt like this but even if you don't feel like this is true, theres always someone who will miss you, even if its just me missing you poetry or someone who thinks you don't notice them, you never know what hides behind lifes next corner so just stay as strong as you can and keep writing such great poetry xxx

*your poetry

Good job. The topic was cliche, but you managed to pull it off nicely, keep writing!

The poem was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Kudos.

another great poem keep up the good work!

wow....this is beyond words. i love the emotion that u put into it. truly beautiful.
Fighter
-xXx-

I hate suicidal poems, but I judge on how well it's written, not necessarily how well I like it. 5.

wonderfl poem~!!~ just wonderful ~!!~
keep it up.