by ChildofGod87 Feb 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
This world with hate ... |
by Ann Stareyes
A very good message with so much truth. Another Great job! lol |
by pinkalias
I can definetly see your point of view. In fact, I think we have alot of the same views on the world. Way to express your thoughts through words and portray how the world has fallen so tragically. |
by *Amanda*
It is defenitly true. I really like this and thank you for commenting on mine, you were right it was a typo and I fixed it, thank you for pointing that out to me! |
by Marta
very nicely done, the poem was very meaningful and effective. keep writing! x x x x |
great poem Sedusha, Blessings to you..*5 |