Comments : "The World That We Are In"

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    even i'm not sure whether all these technologies is for the welfare of mankind...everyday i feel we are digging the grave for ourselves...you have made an excellent point here...takecare and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    great poem Sedusha, Blessings to you..*5

    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    very nicely done, the poem was very meaningful and effective. keep writing! x x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by *Amanda*

    It is defenitly true. I really like this and thank you for commenting on mine, you were right it was a typo and I fixed it, thank you for pointing that out to me!

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I can definetly see your point of view. In fact, I think we have alot of the same views on the world. Way to express your thoughts through words and portray how the world has fallen so tragically.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A very good message with so much truth. Another Great job! lol