i liked it. you really express how it feels to have no one know how you really feel. there are times when i feel like that girl in the poem, and you expressed it perfectly. good job!

Interesting. Good write!

~Ciao Lipton

I like the questions you pose to the reader, also the build up to them. They reflect the images and opinions in ones heart, a facade of sorts. Well done on a great write girl.

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I like it so far AS I HAVE SAID MANY TIMES IT TAKES COURAGE TO SHARE TRUE FEELINGS

this is good i liked the repetition and the style of writing..good job

this poem describes my best friend to the enth degree. Good write.