Comments : Swimming

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Nice poem, I read a book once with the someone who used water as an escape, this poem expressed them feelings greatly, keep it up! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    nice one logan ! rea

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    damn computer...anyway, as i was saying before my computer f u c k e d, its a really good poem !!!!! love
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome poem hun, flowed well and rhymed good, everything was perfection, as it always is. I love you so much, i wish i could make you feel like this always, i love you hun you're so incredible...i love you, i love you <333 xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Oh I loved this poem so much! :) I definitely wish it was Summer, because I do miss swimming terribly.

    Keep up the great work and take care! God bless you!