wow that was so beautiful sweetheart, i loved it a lot. and as for the comment on my poem, why is it not ok to write in caps lol.....thank you tho!! *5 for you

Love Heather.

Oh I liked this:
"If love was a raging storm
I would take off my coat and dance" <<< I'd do that too...hehe...

On this one you should delet the extra "and I"... But if that was meant there ... sry for being picky... =Plol...
"And I and I dropped in one tear"

This one was very lovely:
"If love was the absolute presence
Of undying passion I would love you."

--Well Done-- I hope that you keep on writing, cuz it's awesome!! =D Great Work!!!

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