by Eibutsina Feb 6, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
other
It’s been a while since I’ve seen you last |
by Justin
Aww tht was really good! great poem and thanks for the comment on mine! 5/5 |
by Maddie
Great poem! i really like the style, with 3 consecutive rhyming words at the end of each line.. it really made this poem unique. Maybe instead of writing NAME you could just put a fake name in? because it kind of disturbs the flow when you read NAME.. but not a big deal really. very well written, good job! |
by Amanda
Very good poem. Thanks for commenting on my poem :) |
THis is a really good poem and motivating to those in need of it. *Heather |
by Heathergirl
Very touching nice job... |