Eirisa I am speechless!!! That was absolutley amazing!! As like all of your poems but I especially liked this one!

The fact that you tell her to get herself clean is great and that just shows what a great friend you are and how much you care!

I really liked the stly of this one!! Once again it was a pleasure to read!
love always,
~Chelsey~

i love this one!! i know how it feels to watch friends go down like this...awesome work *5

love Heather.

Very touching nice job...

THis is a really good poem and motivating to those in need of it. *Heather

Very good poem. Thanks for commenting on my poem :)

Great poem! i really like the style, with 3 consecutive rhyming words at the end of each line.. it really made this poem unique. Maybe instead of writing NAME you could just put a fake name in? because it kind of disturbs the flow when you read NAME.. but not a big deal really. very well written, good job!

Aww tht was really good! great poem and thanks for the comment on mine! 5/5