If only you could see me

by Jomar Bautista   Feb 6, 2005


Each day I walk beside you,
DO you not notice
That I always smile when
you are there?

Can't you just see how happy I am
When you are always around,
That I have nothing to fear
Just to be with you

I am always there at your side
When you needed me,
You didn't even have to call.
I noticed it, and came running to you

But you couldn't even see me,
Or should I say you don't even want to try,
You just see me as your friend
And not the one you will love.

Are you blind,
That you don't even see what's happening?
Or are you just ignoring it,
Because you don't like me the way I like you?

Now I know and it hurts,
It will always be like this.
You will never see me,
Even if you do
Would I still love you the same way that I do =(

This is dedicated to d one who loves someone but doesn't notice on how he/she really feels this is for you...=)
Plz vote and rate my poems comment or suggest everything that you wanted to say.Thanks everyone!!!=)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elyssa

    I liked this poem alot... it had a ring to it i give it a five out of five keep it up!2

  • 19 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    great job... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Elyssa

    Great work.... keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    I liked this poem and teh feelings expressed in it, but I felt that in a few parts, the wording could have been better. For example,

    That I have nothing to fear
    Just to be with you

    Perhaps add another line with something like, 'is enough for me', or change the first line to make it clear what 'just to be with you' is supposed to mean-wow, that was a long comment! lol. Good poem though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Janice Brown~©~

    WOW good poem dude.. thanx for commentin on mine... ur a great writer
    luv always janice
    xoxox