Sweet satan

by clevername   Feb 6, 2005


Sweet Satan
You took my breath away
That dark night in the mist of all the dismay
You rubbed my smooth face
As I stared into your eyes this was no disguise
A weeping willow in the pitch black night
Hung over us sensing no freight
As Satan and I made out it swayed
This was something that just couldn’t b delayed

Your hair grew black as mine did to
Your eyes deepening and turning bright blue
There was something about this dark gloomy night
That stole away every speck of light

So opening my eyes I felt this was only a dream of hell
For I felt so beautiful as I fell through that well

For I had woken up and ran down the yard
In the dark my heart pounded so hard

I wanted to reach you Satan so badly
And I felt there was no other way
So I jumped down that well
Placed so sweetly in the grass
My mind was so happy as I fell

This was a beautiful sight in the inside of this hole
Falling I saw all the bricks, on the inside of the walls do they roll

"oh Satan" I screamed\"I am coming for you my love! I am coming"

"so that you may take my breath away
In a dark night in the mist of dismay
You’ll rub my smooth face as I stare into your eyes
For your satanic outfit was no disguise
They’ll be a weeping willow in the pitch black night
Hung over us sensing no freight
As a we make out it will sway
And I will smile because my life was finally taken away"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Nicely done!! Very dark I loved it.. 5/5

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    thank you so much taylor! i love everything u write so much 2

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! this is great! i'm glad you recomended it to me! really this is so beautifully written and it's so creative! the story keeps replaying in my mind! i love it! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor