Suicide

by Hurtingsoul   Feb 6, 2005


I'm standing in the storm,in the rain
with the rain mixed with my tears, mending the pain
in holy cries I scream in the middle of nowhere
trying to release my suffering inside me somewhere

As the rain hits the steel of my knife
i cry to let go of my strife
but I'm trying not to cut
I'm trying not to make a scar
cause i know someone has to care even if its a person from afar

Forever i cannot live on my pain
i need to live my life
here i am trying to strain
not to let my knife through my heart, not to commit suicide

light of lighting crosses the sky
signaling me not to die
and the thunder booms in the middle of nowhere
trying to show me some one cares

don't commit suicide people
your destroying hopes,and loves
and the people that committed suicide are crying for you from above

don't let suffering take over
don't let yourself leave forever

in the help of my cries
I'm telling you don't commit the thing that takes your life's

*for all the people thinking to commit suicide*please rate and comment*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! so true! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor