Hey i know what your goign through. my father was in a bad acident in september on a moror cycle, he is paralized from his shoulders down right now. so to answer your ? my poem is true. your poem is great, best of luck to you and your family.

love Brittany

thanks for the concern [your comment to my poem long ago], i was 11 too; the age where everything starts to make sense. and i do wish i could spend another moment with him.

good luck
Vanessa

Thats sad
great job though!
i love it
5/5 and dont take anything less!!

Yea i can see now a death of a family memember at any age but especially when ur young anyways thanks for commenting my poem i really wanted some feedback from that it took alot out of me to write that

Sorry about your loss...so you were 11? i was 16...its sooo hard to have lost some1 sooo close. i lost my best friend that night

Dang girl.. yea it is hard i am sorry u have to live with this pain as well mi dad passed almost 2 years ago..its the hardest thing i have ever had to deal with... i am sorry for ur loss.. ur a good writer tho...