Nice job. Capitilize the I's in your poem because it detracts from teh poem if you don't. (sorry I have a pet peeve about capitilization) But otherwise, good job!

Defintately a good poem. I liked it.

Hey, this is good...i can relate to this...keep ur head up i hope thingz get better between you guyz...take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

wow, so torn, so fragile and sad! Keep on writing 'cause that was strong!!! 5/5
luv kt

Good rythm and expression. That's all I need for it to be a 5.

sorry 4 not comenting on your poems, i been quite busy. I feel really bad, specially cuz this poem iz awesome!
Thank you for reading my poems I apreciate it. Can't wait to read more of yours.

Love ya Sammi.

i really like it well done can relate to it sorta thanks for commenting on mine
luv always
janice

aw, that's so sad. the poem was really really good, very well-written and emotional. keep it up xxxx
-thanks for your comment!

i LOVED your poem, it was SO good and i can really relate to it alotttt.. great work, and keep your head up-things always turn around for the better :o)

Check out my poems if your interested, and comment if you like them!! it means alot to me!! :o) thankss

..xO Jessie

Another great poem.. its sad but it was beautifully written.. i know how you feel so i can relate to everything in this poem. you put so much emotion into your poems! =) awesome work! keep it up =)

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